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Kolto Dreams- Gift by Shaedry Kolto Dreams- Gift by Shaedry
SO. This is a gift for *KalmaStari who was kind enough to get me a premium membership. (You rescued me from Ads, you have my gratitude. :salute:)

The idea behind this, is that this is what the Exile could be feeling/thinking about JUST as they wake up. They would think that they are suspending in a sea or something and......

Who am I kidding? I love flowing stuff and I love blue. Those are all the reasons I need.

Bakarne belongs to *KalmaStari
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The hair on this... oh my gosh... The hair, whatever you did, looks really amazing, especially for being suspended underwater like you're trying to protray. I have noticed your longsuit is in textures and background such as that. It's very lovely to see it again!

The hands are good, but they look a bit long. Put your wwrist to your chin. Your ring and index finger meet at about your eyebrows. This is hand is a bit too long. It has a BEAUTIFUL shape to it and hands are such a pain in the butt to draw. They're just a weeny bit too large. Also her right arm needs to be lengthened. (Her right not our right.) The wrist goes more past the hip line.

The anatomy on this is bugging me a bit. She has this thick body but these skinny arms. If you want her to be thin, thin out the body. If you want her to be thick, thicken out the arms and legs, especially. Women's legs run thick, especially the upper leg. If her shirt is supposed to be baggy you need to add some more folding into the cloth.

Her right leg is a bit... skewy. I think it's the foot that's throwing me off. Have the foot so that it's extended and facing directly towards the camera instead of bent a bit sideways as it is. I think that will help you.

The expression that you captured in this is very nice. I LOVE the effects you did with the background, as it really looks like water. I might have added some bubbles to show movement and the air leaving her nose/mouth, but that's just me.

You did a very good job catching the light under this aquatic surface of yours, off the hair and cloth, which could be the hardest shading that you could do.

The overall mood that you were trying to get is excecuted very well, and this is a picture I haven't seen from you before. It's a very touching photo and goes perfectly with the sort of feeling that you were going along with. This is excellent, excellent work. 8D
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Xephinetsa Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, Sha! This looks great! I love how her hair looks, all fluffy and flowy and... very pretty. Nice work with her expression! She looks like she's suffering. Poor Bak. :c
Shaedry Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! 8D

I imagine that while in the kolto tank she would be thinking of her past, probably regretting some stuff. So that's why I gave her that emotion.
Xephinetsa Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, Sha!

Mm, yeah. It makes sense.
Secondsynergy Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AAAAAAAH! Shae! I've been waiting for more art from you <3 Bak's hair is LOVELY. I want to touch it and hug it. ;_;
Shaedry Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :tighthug:

I want to touch it to, I had so much fun with it. XD
KalmaStari Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, wow....:jawdrop: This is beautiful, Sha! Thank you! Thank you! :D
I love how her hair is and the position of her legs looks very life like! Very good job, Sha! :tighthug:

Wait a second...I thought I did anonymously! How did you figure it out?!?!??! You have a ninja don't you? :evileye:
Shaedry Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome, I am glad you like it! 8D

Tee hee hee! Others will never know! (andyesidohaveaninja)XD
KalmaStari Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That I do! :D

:O_o: :XD: (Iknewit!) :XD:
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January 18, 2013
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